These were his responses to everything I sent him, (which was all the pages I posted in the past few blogs.) Tom has also helped me out a lot with the magazine along with my other classmate Jake. if I was ever stuck on any decision making, I knew they would be good people to help me out since its coming from an outside perspective. And they might not fit my exact target audience (since they are boys and I feel like my magazine was more feminine ), but they still fit in the age range I wanted for my magazine.
With Tom's responses, in his second point I did happen to fix the boxes on the front cover page to make them more even and also raised one higher so it didn't interfere as much with the photo. I thought this was good advice because I honestly did not even notice the boxes being uneven but I did not like how one of them was on the picture so much. With his first point about adding the black border around the title, I tried it out and the cover looked more fake and didn't have the real look that it had before. I sent him another picture and he agreed with what I said about it not looking as real and then said to change it back to how it was before. With his final point, I agreed with him about the colors giving off a summer vibe and it was not like that a few days ago. At first, I initially thought that if I added a lot of color that it would look too crazy and too much. But then I rethought about what I am trying to achieve and it fits perfect with that.
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